Thursday, February 16, 2012

Lots of Pages to Write

The first draft of my thesis statement:

In sports scenes, specifically those centered around ice hockey, writers use verb and word choice, dialogue, internal monologue, sensory details, and varying sentence structures to intensify the emotional connection between the reader and the main character/s, allowing the reader to focus on the emotional core of the story rather than the action sequences and technical language of the sport.

Awesome.

But...

So what?

How to turn that into an argument, that is the question. Any tips would be appreciated.

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